chicago, a redaction

23 Nov

A redactive poem by Ashleigh Hill fit for the day before Thanksgiving.

"Chicago." Redaction by Ashleigh Hill

Snow
on top of
deep snow
on top of
snow up on his knees.

They were home.

:: :: ::

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4 Responses to “chicago, a redaction”

  1. Gwen November 23, 2011 at 2:20 pm #

    Perfect. Lived in Milwaukee for 7 yrs. still shoveling

    • Timothy Schuler November 23, 2011 at 4:13 pm #

      Indeed! Yes, it’s coming. Ashleigh’s poem is a fitting introduction to the season…. are you a poet as well?

      • Gwen November 23, 2011 at 4:39 pm #

        Been told that. November and the bike ride on my site had to be written that way

  2. Ashleigh November 24, 2011 at 1:56 am #

    Thanks friend!

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